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Rhyme scheme. I've been so into free-verse and descriptive poetry lately, that I have not read one of these for..a while.

I while meaning a day, which is plenty.

I like that you used "Maybe you will realize'' every single stanza, but the title of the poem is ''Hopefully you would realize'' so that is a little different.

I don't know, I like the poem, great flow and everything...

Good job.

Love this poem. Will comment more when I have time ... 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox