Hey this poem made me think...i liked it..it was neat..and well written and a really intresting message.
keep writing hun.
xx

I really injoyed reading it. it really is an eye opener. and so freaking true.

You’ll change your mind if you see them drip sweat...
You’ll change your mind if you smell their blood

haha that sold it :D

Great message to that poem.. really good!!

Wow talk bout good i
really liked your poem
it was really good it was
well written good job

Wow....the poems alsome!!! thanxz for commenting on my one and i know the middle was kinda blah but i wasnt feeling to hot when i wrote it, so yeah i gotta work on it some...well read some of my others and comment and tell me which of yours you want me too read, read my one called "as invisible as he makes me feel"...

By the way i added you to my favorites!!

I can totally relate to that I hate it when parents say well you're too young or blah non-sence then when u dont help the say kids are so lazy now adays its annoing anyways good write!

The message you portray is undoubtedly strong and powerful. I think what you say is true the world over - adulthood bestows on us a kind of blinkers that allows us to pass judgement without hearing and to conclude without analysing.

being a teenager is one of the most special things - because you still retain the curiosity of a child and yet, gain new perspectives as adults. that's what makes you guys so wonderful and you'll see that the real adults who matter won't judge you, while the ones who judge actually don't matter at all.

keep writing gals - U 2 rock!!

love and hugs
shobhana

I was reading the post on Billy Rob and happen to see yours. When you asked him to read this one, I had to take a look at it for myself. And boy, did I look... and read... and related. Being an adult with children I could relate to the fact that people do judge teenagers. My children were lumped in catagories that just weren't them because of the way they dressed and the way they spoke. I always raised my children to not be afraid to speak their mind or to voice outrage when they believed something was wrong. I never believed all children were lazy and heartless. I raised 4 that aren't.

Great job on this! I love this poem because it is so true. I like the way that you repeated the first stanza on the last... that always gives it a nice effect. And I really liked the last two lines of the second stanza. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Love the poem, very expressive. thanks for the comment on mine.