VERY NICEEEEEEEEEEE !!! I LOVE IT .

"broke my heart right in two."

In this line I think you should take out the word 'right'. It will flow alot better.
Also, a couple of your lines ran together so you need to edit it. It's this line:
"I was riddled with grief. I found no solace,"

Other than those two things, the poem is flawless. Lots of uncharted emotion and beautifully written. Keep it up~Holly

Cry me a river - that's such a profound way of expressing the depth of grief. beatiful verse.

love and hugs
shobhana

You have a talent
this is just amazing i never read so many poems by one author you kept me interested i think this is cool and its exciting cause im in love with poetry
nice job 5/5