Awww.. wow.. this was an amazing poem! it was oozing emotion, flowed effortlessly, and really drew me in.. wonderful work! 5/5

Nice. i liked it alot, it kept me reading.. very good =)

AWWW THIS IS A REALLY NICE POEM... I ADDED U ALSO AND THANX FOR THE COMMENT...

Pretty good.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

Absolutly Amazing.
I hung on to every word you wrote.
it was very good.