Absotively beautiful. I loved the imagery, it was almost like i was there!

5/5
_allanah

Nice... the words you used were great and made me imagine the poem beautifully...

~angel~

Overall this poem was good. we can see the emotion put into it. good job.
Driver

Aww that was sooo sweet i can definitely relate to this alot...it was filled with tons of emotions..your description was amazing..i loved it definitely 5/5

Wow thts really good......i told you im not harsh!!