Oh my, that was really depressing! it made me really sad, i hope the person you are writing about isnt you or anyone else for that matter. Its so bad that people only ever see there pain, and no one elses. Its happened to me many times, be strong.
love Tara-Kay
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Omg Brandy no no no. darling you are to good for this. please dont do it baby girl i love you and so do many many other people. please take care sweetie. i love you loads. Aimee xoxo

Wow i bet tht i will notice.... good poem a 5/5 for me..

Been there, its not fun, death isnt pretty and the closer you get the more it hurts.

The poetry itself wasnt bad, a bit raw maybe. You do show potential, so keep writing! It would be a pity to throw it away.