I like this one! good job and keep it up!

Thats very inspirational I luv it!

I neva said sat shit was mine

The poem is really great we need more people like you who see this thank you so much for bringing this about
we as young people need to cast all the bad out. you go girl!

Thats pretty wicked. Its very rich in different ideals and opinions. Lots of strong arguments, really makes your audience think. Really great poem. I would say maybe refine it a little, perhaps make a new piece focusing on just one of the issues. But thats your style and I like it just the way it is aswell.

Awesome poem...I find myself writing about stuff like this all the time!!! It makes me angry just like it does you..I liked this poem, very interesting and differently written!! 5/5....don't stop writing whats on your mind....your truly getting through to people!
-Krissey

P.S would appreciate if you read "Painted Cardboard Shoes"

A great poem, keep ur great job up

I like it. Its a little bit like my slang poem you commented on. Keep up the good work.

Great poem you really put emotions and opinions together in a great way good opinions good poem I gave it 5/5.

Hey thats really a remarkable thought which u hv expressed really beautifully, great piece indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

FANTASTIC POEM, the meaning is so strong and you can feel the impact of it through every word!

Hey thats really good, thanks for commenting on my poems, those are my only poems i've ever written. I'm not very good but thanks, and yours are all great too.

I like the way you write but you need to work on you writeing

I like the way you write but you need to work on you writeing

I like the way you write but you need to work on you writeing

I like the way you write but you need to work on you writeing

Wow...I really like this one.
-April

Wow, very inspirational poem that raises issues that although people try to ignore still stand out and are a big part of our lives!!!
Well done!

Strong poem. It reminds me of the Bob Marley song, "Get up/Stand up". We must always do the right thing, because it is the right thing to do.

Someone once said, "I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not". This poem speaks volumes. Be yourself and do the right thing, the world will follow.

Three words FAN TAS TIC!