Ah...this is worthy of the spotlight.
A poem that is marvelous if not perfect!

God Bless!

I really liked your poem. I would really like it if you were to read some of mine, you seem to know your poems.

Awh! This was beautiful! I loved the opening line. Nicely done! Congradulations on the award too, well deserved. :] Keep it up!

Natalie``

Short and not my usual style. But you did a wonderful job in bring tranquility to your words.

Woo! man, i'm a big fan of this. this is exactly the kind of poetry that draws me in and influences my own poems. "clear and pure like how God must sound..." not only does that have some pretty cool assonance, i love the idea!

Beautiful its good to see a different approach in poems i love
Take care
HS

Your poem has absolutaly no meaning although you explain a feeling but thats all there is no storyline soz to be harsh but someone should tell u and what experience are u explaining not one that myself can fell only the way you ride a bike good luck with ur next poem

Lovely...