Wow.. such a passionat poem, although it was long i couldnt stop reading, you wrote it so well, and i loved the whole idea of your poem being in someones head and not actually the real thing, it and a great flow to it.keep it up 5/5..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

Wow I thought that was really good!
I love the way its in the mind! Really really good!

Its amazing, so intense, so vivid and just pleasing to read all over.

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i love the way that it woz.nt for real!
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Made me so HORNY just readin it!

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This is a great poem,, i loved how it was in the mind,, 5/5
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All i can say is D AMN 5/5