I think its great

Baby i didn't think it was all that bad. Have a little faith in your self darling.
-Amanda

This was pretty good.. it describes how you feel very well... the descriptions could be improved but they still worked..

When it comes you
^ i think you are missing a "to" before "you"

nice job, keep it up! 4/5

Wow.......thts really good......ur a awsome poet!! keep on writing...

Hunny!!! i loved it, and you shuldnt change it because that is the way you feel and it is great like that!! you really have some talent and defiantely a 5/5 from me!!!

xoxo Lucy

Awww5/5