This si really cool lol
the poem was good :):):):) will ya comment on some of my poems please i like as much feedback as poss thnx hunni xxxx alex xxxx

LOL AWWAH I LIKE THIS POEM, AND IM SURE LIL KIDDIES WILL TOO...(opps sorry bout the caps..didnt no they were on lol) but yeah..great write! hope you did well in your class project..keep writting..please rate and comment on my poems, thanks, kirsty palmer xx

Cool pom i like it. i think it was a bit confusing tho...