Hey mimzy thanks for tha comment n i think your poems are amazing gud work aye lol
u got msn??

Wow! i can really relate to this piece...
it's exactly how i felt with my first boyfriend.
we were a couple for 6 years but it didn't work.And it was really painful...

WOW!! Great poem! Again loved the emotion...i liked your choice of words there and the it flowed very well! the opening stanza captured me just like the title and the ending was excellent! Keep up the Great work!
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*DK

A confession of the souls deepest feeling, written down with true passion. Great write.