Wow thats so sweet...5/5
MAyb you should make him read this.
Well,if i were u dad,damn i would be proud of my gurl...hehe u look like a great gurl!!
KEep it up,and prey for him!!!
Dont give up too!!!

Kly

Thanks 4 the comment! ya i dont kno if i should show him or not. its hard enough to talk to him about it!! plz pray 4 him!! THANX A BUNCH!!

Awwwww.. this was soo sad.. try and fix up your spelling mistakes.. also, maybe put it into more of a poetry format and punctuate it properly.. nice job, keep up the good work.. and i am really sorry about your dad.. 4/5

You poor thing. I am so sorry about your dad! i don't know if u believe in God or not but i do and i believe in his miracles. And God has a plan for your dad's life and what ever happens will be for the best. I can't imagine what ur going through. My dad is my best friend and i really hope ur dad gets better really soon. I will say a prayer for ur dad and u. if u don't have time that's okay but if u could comment on my poem "down on my knees" that would be awsome. but you don't have to. just keep ur head up and have faith. cause God will get u through anything!! thanx and bless u

Aww I'm sorry about your dad. My baby cousin had cancer but after 3 years of battling he finally got rid of it, and its been gone for 5 years now. I'll pray for you.

Awe im sorry about ur dad. cancer sucks. my dad and mom broke up when i was 7 yrs old.. and its been hard.. well ill pray for yu and ur dad ..keep ur head up girl..u wrote great poems

WOW YOU HAVE A LOT OF POEMS I CAN RELATE TO
MY DAD LEFT ME WHEN I WAS ABOUT 1 AND IT HAS BEEN HARD ON ME BUT HOPEFULLY YOU WON'T HAVE TO GO THROUGH WHAT I HAD TO

This is a great poem 5/5. I'm so sorry for you and your dad. I hpe your dad gets better. And thank you so much for the comment. keep up the great work!
*~Kelsey~*

This poem touchs me in the deepest way, my boyfriends dad past away from a large brain tumor and i know how hard it was for him, keep ur head up!!!! and keep on writing ur amazing!!!!!!!

<3, leah

Thats life. it is better that you can see and talk with him. do your best now when you can still love show.

Omg! it was sad!!!!!!

im sorry about ur dad, and i hope hes in better now.

good job with this piece..

<3 Aly