Sad, but very good, I like your style

I really like it...the only thing is it has a wonderful flow...you just have to look for it with the way you typed it...it seems more like a story then a poem, if you would end your lines it would look more like a poem...but it's really really good i like it alot...there's such wonderful imagery...an wonderful vivid words...your a great writer keep it up

Hey there.. well your poem is amazing i loved every single part of it, and thanks for commenting my poems, i'll keep my eye on your work as long as you keep yours on mine :D thx again, great poem, tc now byes!