Its good.
but its Simple..
Simplicity is Good..
but yet you might wanna pound
some Big Detailed words in there
You know the feeling of a heartbreak
Describe it well..
Youll get alot more votes
trust me
5/5
~MF~

Well it is simple but says a lot..and i know how bad that can hurt! ahh so anyways even tho its simple its very good 5/5 keep it up..ur pretty good at writing...

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~