What I would do.....

by Rachel   Aug 9, 2006


I would go to the end of the earth
To show you what my love is worth
I would swim to the bottom of the sea
To show you how much you mean to me

I would climb a mountain high
To show you I need you by my side
I would wish upon every star
To show you just how special you are

I hope this shows the love we have together
And how it will last until past forever

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  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    Great poem very heart warming

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    I really like what's here, but feel you could make this longer. The pacing is great and you did some great word choices. My suggestion would be to use this as a rough draft and add to it sometime!

  • 17 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awwww thats so sweet!!! i loved the flow!!! great job hunny!!! 5/5

    xoxo Lucy

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awww that was soo cute, I can definitely relate to this alottttt...you said what i'm thinking perfectly!! your imagery was excellent! great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked the ending lines. =) ..They were sweet. Tehe. This was a beautiful, heartfelt poem. Very niiiice. It also put a smile on my face, which I needed! ..Awesome work. Your poems are great! And thanks for your kind comments, means alot. xx. 5/5

    Natalie``

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