Wow it mite b...lol not 4 a long time...i liked this poem makes me shiver a bit keep on writing!!!

Reminds me of a poem I wrote a while back ago. Not the way you wrote it just the concept. Once upon a time The End of us all came. It certainly doesn't have as many visits or votes but I don't do a lot to get noticed. Well I gave it a five see ya.

Awesome job, Darien.

'Powerful winds twisted in all directions
Ripping into pieces, anything in its path
Destruction, mayhem, nothing survives
The Apocalypse, the end of the world'

I love those lines. Their just awesome...

.:Sam:.
.:Fem of the Blood:.

This was nicely written, Hun. I loved the detail and very vivid images I got when I read this. I thought it was very descriptive and your wording choices where amazing. It tied this poem together very well. I enjoyed reading it aswell. Truelly, it was nicely done. ^^

Another very nice written poem!
i loved it!!!!
amazing...

Excellent imagery, powerful wording, very good job.

Oh wow...
I loved this muchly.
The imagery used in this was absolutely fantastic.
Perfect.