HIM

by Rosie   Aug 9, 2006


My life isn't worth living for
My life just makes me sore
I love him so much
He has the angles touch

I get made fun of
From the one person i love
He hates me sometimes
I just wish he would become mine

He loves me but he hates me
Thats all that i can see
I just wish he loved me like he does her
But instead all he does is make my heart sore!!!!!!

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(Pleez vote or comment on this, i wrote this when i waz 8 years old! )

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  • 17 years ago

    by Emily

    Hahaha i can totally relate! love this poem. thanks for the comment. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by lilia

    Very nice and heartfelt hun!! i can totaly relate, and i say just tell him how you feel, or else you'll regret it. thank you soooo much for commenting on my poems.ill be back to check out your other poems soon.

    ~lilia~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kersten

    Hey Rosie, thanks for your comment.. It means alot to me... And oh about your crush what i think is if you truely do love him i say go for it... Don't hold back and never take your time for granted with him b/c one day you could loss him... And i'm glad that you are going to try and write about happy love poems... Thats all i really write.. And i think its funny my b.f.f just asked me today to write her a sad love poem about her and her b.f and that one is going to be a chanllenge so wish me good luck... And if you would check out my other poems tell me what you think good or bad it doesn't matter.... TTYL bye...

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