It has an interesting touch! i like how you have put her in {} thats a really good method, yet another fantastic poem!!! 5/5 again from me

xoxo Lucy

Really descriptive, I loved the ending
great work

I honestly don't know why you put "this wasn't suppose to make very much sense." Firstly the reader can interpret it in their own way, and believe me 9 times out of 10 they will in one way or another. Secondly, why write and post something as a poem that doesn't make sense?
Anyway...to me this seemed as if you were thinking through in your head about your emotions and anger and what you would do to {her} given the chance.
It's somewhat cliche in the sense of teenage angst wanting to hurt someone for revenge, but you got your message across well nevertheless.
The line "As courage climb inside of me" should be "As courage climbs inside of me."
Keep writing.

Wow. Dark poem lol. I liked it though. A lot. I could feel the hate in it! It's just how I felt when I wrote one of my explicit poems hehe =) Hmm...Well, I hope you don't really feel this way...it's horrible =(

Anyways...back to the poem...flow was good, topic was good, and from the heart. =) Great job. Keep it up! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

5/5

I love an angry poem once in awhile.