Thts sad.......may she should get out of there.....good poem keep on writin!!!

How can one confined space make someone feel so low?
It can pull down a person's positivity
Turn it into negativity

^^Liked those lines alot!

It was a pretty good poem, too. There were some places where I felt the flow was a little rocky, but you got your message across very clearly. I loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Another great sad poem, written so perfectly. great job

I completely understand, I know how you feel. Great way of letting out your emotions. 5/5

~ Tina

You had a lot of good lines in this poem, it was really well written. Keep on writing!..