Good poem...i liked how you chose ur poem....keep on writin!!!

Hmm.. i didn't really like this one.. it seemed to not have a point and it wasn't really funny.. there was a lot of repitition which i think threw off the flow a little.. try putting this in a different section and make it a little bit clearer.. 3/5

I loved this one. I love the meaning in it. So strong... 5/5

~ Tina

I love your poems :):)