Awwwwwwwww...thts sooo sad......i liked it...keep on writin!!

Honestly this poem made me cry, I remembered some past time of my life, this is so great, i really love the way you have expressed your feelings in word. great job
and as always 5/5

Awwwww.. that was so sad sweetie.. the descriptions were beautiful, the flow was good, and the emotion was loud and clear.. wonderful job hunny.. 5/5

This is a sad one. It's so full of emotion. Keep it up 5/5

~ Tina

Ill accept this is sad and every poet made this one cry I love the feelings you put Very very great and so captivating nicely written and very vivid details

This poem seemed more like a nursery rhyme. Which was really cool. A sad nursery rhyme, lol. Good stuff :)

This is really gud n sad and i know how it must feel