So simple, but yet, so beautiful. 5/5

~ Tina

Wow, Jessy. I've never seen or heard of one of these, they actually look really hard, but you did an excellent job with it. Amazing choice of wording for this aswel. A really great write. Keep it up hunny. 5/5

Natalie``

Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
:):):)

plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

Good Job, it was so short but so emotonal!!! I loved it!!! I tried to write one and i failed on the SOW this time!! :-( Great Job!!5/5

Wow,
that takes talent,mine would make no sense and be done.gotta give you credit.5/5.keep it up girl!!
--lexie

Short (well, Lanturne), but hauntingly beautiful. I loved the "scarlet rain" reference.

Excellent. 5/5

[Tragic]

Hmm...I should try this style, sounds interesting, great job.

Ohhhh. I love this poem. I liked the imagery and the wording. I liked the style it was really creative. Great Job yet again Jessy.

This is a great job. You followed the pattern perfectly. Stuck to the subject and everything. 5/5
-Kakashi

I do not like the last line at all.. It really ruins and takes away from the poem in my opinion.. But the rest was really good.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I find "blood" and the description "scarlet" very cliche, so I wasn't too keen on this. I did however like the use of onomatopoeia on the last line. Thanks for sharing.