Loved it keep it up your a good writer ill keep reading if you keep writing lol
:):):)

plz vote on some of my poems and let me know what you think thnx xxx alex xxx :):):)

From what I can read it sounds good, but then I can't understand some of it. There seems to be a lot of errors. You should make it stop. I'll come back to read it later when it's fixed, I don't mean to be rude or anything, but I can't understand it. kthx -Gypsy 83[must die]

It was a bit hard to read but somehow I managed =] It's very well written and I liked it. Be sure to fix up those errors though =] I'll shut up now and give you that 5/5
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

Wow..
5/5