Awwwwww what a lovely poem!!! I loved ' I lean over my world,and kiss your eyes'
5/5!!!

Nice topic. Overall it was good. Parts of the rhyming seemed forced, but keep plugging away.

Heavenly imagery in this romantic love poem... keep it up

I really like this...it keeps ur attention...u want to read more...ur a good writer...

I love this poem!! u are such a good writer!! keep up with the poems i like them!!

My god that was really great. i loved it. thanks for the comment check out more if you want to.

god bless

Aww. This makes me feel like I should be in a relationship. Lol. I liked it. The flow was good, and the words were well chosen out. Great work. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hey thx 4 da comment ur good at writing poems

This is a really good poem :)

Sarah

I absolutley love it. along with all your other poems too. keep up the good work =]]

This is sweet xx

Wonderful write. 5/5