I think this is the second poem of yours i've read, and they were both good. they seem very consciencious and aware

This poem seriously rocks...it's cool gal...u did a great work...that's all I hev got 2 say..it's totally awesome...=)

I love this poem!! I liked the message and the flow and rhyme were outstanding!! I loved this stanza:

"I know each and every sign,
and I know what to avoid,
yet still I'm becoming more and more like you,
bitter, destructive, and destroyed."

Beautifully written!! 5/5!!

Another great one.. but not my favorite.. the flow was off in the seconde and third stanza .. but besides that the rhyme was good and the idea was as well

i loved this stanza
"Now I walk the same path in your footsteps,
only this time the cliff belongs to me,
breaking down with every step,
falling for eternity."

Another great poem! well penned! I like this 2 lines! 5/5!

Now I walk the same path in your footsteps,
only this time the cliff belongs to me,