Wow this is a really awesome poem!! i give u some props on this one.....it really expresses how u feel..and i really liked that.. :)..

This poem is really good...i like it a lot... keep writting!
*~[Zkey]~*

Hey! Thanks for your comments!
Right some feedback for you...
Love these lines
'Your the air that i breath,
And your all that i need'
They're just incredible lines. On a poor note i don't really like the very last line. It kind of takes away the whole feel of the rest of the poem. It's a good piece of poetry that conveys your feelings well. Love it! 5/5!!!

Jemma

Awwwww..that was so sweet! the descriptions were beautiful, as were the metaphors you used.. the flow worked well most of the time and the emotion was loud and clear.. nice job! 5/5

Lurve it

I especially love this one verse...

Babe like a flower needs rain,
I need you to help my pain,
Without you in my life,
I wouldn't be the same.

keep it up... 5/5

Awww...thats cute. its so beautifull to be inlove... :-P.

thanks for your comment it means alot to me!!
keep it up!!

xoxo
take care

p.s. 5/5

Diana

Hi thanks your comment too. Nice poem here liked it the best..mmm ttyl and thanks again. bye.

Hmmm jus a word came to my mind after reading ur poems... iss just WOW... really really u r v gud writter...!
brilliant work!!!
BYE!

Cute. i like it :)

I like this poem alot i barly have time to put my poems up because of school and my family but i will try thanx for the comment

~mandy~

I like this one a lot. I usually don't write love poems, not happy ones anyway, but I do enjoy reading them.

I like this one i have a relashinship like that it really touched home i hope you liked my as mush as i like yours -chorro-

I think this poem is pretty good, I liked the rhyming, and the lines were very sweet. I've been writing sad poems lately, they're addictive...so I know what you mean, sometimes it's hard to write happy things. But this one is really good.