Together Apart

by Ethan   Aug 11, 2006


All i can do is tell you I Love you. Cause we are together apart.
I knew because it was love at first sight, i knew we would be together apart.
I wish you were here or i was there, because i hate being together apart.
The tears i keep inside, the tears i dont cry for you, because we are together apart.
you might ask what is together apart, it is us, we are together but apart.
I just noticed that this poem is kinda dumb, being together apart.
The words i wirte sound stupid, i think i am gonna quit now, but were still together apart.

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  • 19 years ago

    by jessy

    Wow...great poem....and the words together/apart were perfect..they make much sence to me for i am in sum what of the same situation..i live in america and my love is in england.....but anyway the words you used were perfect and described it all well...great poem keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by donna

    Aww I thought the poem was cute.. I love 'together apart' think you should have kept it going without dissing it tho lol.. I thought it was really sweet.. am going to give you 5/5 but that isn't for the last lines of it, thats for the rest ;) xx