Wow. this is really nicely written. good job, i love everything about it, it leaving me kinda wondering..

niice job.

Wow awesome poem.
it was really well written

sophie:)

Aww, that was so cute. i lovved it. you have a different way of writting and i think its very unique.. niicely done.

Omg...you have a lot of talent, like...wow. I really wish a guy would write a poem like this about me...it is soooo sweet. You write very well about what you feel...I liked the way you ended it with the same 2 lines as the first....it worked wonderfully.
I am adding you to my favorites. (^_^)
5.5
Breanna