This poem is sooooo sweet. I wish I had that

I agree with her ^^^ I wish I had a guy to write a poem like that for me. You must really love some girl...I hope everything works out for you. I loved this poem, it was beautiful...Great job.
5.5
Breanna

Pretty good but now step it up, put some form in your poem, quatrains are nice and simple aabb or abab