Thz u dont know how much this help me to write more and be better

Short and sweet... Really nice poem... keep up this good work :)

Hmm the title told me i had to read this poem and i have no idea if this was one of your first poems written or not but it was good. i think the only part of it i disliked is when you abreviated some of the words. but the metaphor comparing you to the earth and him to the sun was great i loved that - raindrops 5/5

Thz alot

I did not understand any of this. I'm sorry but half of the words are not spelled right, and the flow was off. i think that if you want more people to comment you should fix it up a little bit.