That wuz so cool...i luved it...it's so powerful...an true...ur a great writer

Hey, this is a really true, and meanigful piece of writing, really good, keep it up ! Mad x x

Wow! I had a couple poems w/ an attempted God meaning you know but it became kinda awkward when i wasnt really feeling moved by the spirit at the time so to speak...... anyways great job! loved the poem!

much love ~ Jess

I kinda lost my faith because of the same questions You asked in this poem/prayer.. If You ever get the answers please let me know.. another excellent poem.. 5/5 xx and yes I am sat here reading through all your poems lol

[So this is the prayer, the prayer of a saint,
What lies in store for this evil race.
]

o.O Broke the rhyming scheme. Lol. Maybe it was intentional, I'm not quite sure.

But other than that, the poem was great! It had terrific meaning in it, great flow in most of it, and was just...great! Lol. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Real nice prayer. Great work, nice to read. But maybe its not gods task to make things good. Its those of the you and the mes

WOW!!
This was truly excellent, another favourite.
I liked how you turned it into a prayer at the end.
Another 5/5
P.S Two of the poems you asked me to vote and comment on I have already done in the past, so I'm going to go choose another two.

Evil race????.... And....'made in His image'......Honey...you really had me heading for an Amen! up until that last line......The forces of evil are not equivalent to the divine force in every human being.....I beg you to reconsider this particular line of thinking.......What is going here on is a Monumental Struggle for the Souls of Beings of Free Will.....so....we have to choose....and then....strive mightily, for the rest of our lives, to meet the requirements of that choice....Your poem inspired this full blown response...that says something, too......

One thing is for sure, you put a lot of mind and heart in your poems which is great. it sets you apart.

your servant:
david

I liked it, it was very powerful and nice, 5/5