Pearl (acrostic)

by XXTruthSeekerXX   Aug 12, 2006


Perfect rapture descends to the seas
Entering the gaping mouths of ocean's breath
Ancient metallic hues of an expertise
Rosy blush from stooping sunlight rays
Lost to the mystic whispering breeze

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  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Wow.....i love acrostic poems....amazing....bravo..a 5/5 =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Perhaps my mind is so simple to not feel what you are feeling in this poem. 4.5
    I don't seem to enjoy the short poems as much as the lengthy ones...

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah, excellent job. You did a perfect job of using vocab and i could see exactly what you were writing about. Great work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wow. That was just beautiful. Every line had such perfect stunning imagery and vocab.
    Excellent job
    10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Ooh, woweee! This was amazing, Noni. I loved your vocab in this one! You're really good at writing nature poems, I hope you know that. This was great. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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