Deep and kinda depressing but I like it 5/5 =]
Love,
Rayne x3

Peace

You said you like proper feedback well whats to sat lol it was brilliant actually it was kinda strange where there was only one rhyme i could see maybe spread it out a bit more but otherwise bloody brilliant wow :):)

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That is totally good!!!!!!AND deep!!!!!!!!!! YOur really talented!!!!!!!

*Jay*

Love it, love it, love it
this is awsome
and because it is like a prayer i love it even more

Damn good, damn good, it was true beautiy... thank u.. i realy injoyed reading it...

Format, yet again, was horrible for a poem. But the feelings and emotion are amazing. =) Good job. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I liked how you conveyed your sad emotion into this and the style is different from everything i have ever read and it is beautiful. 5/5

Hmm.
Its sad.
But you got the message out pretty well

THIS POEM IS DEEP.............I LOVE IT