I Am Completely Yours

by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™   Aug 12, 2006


I can't wait till I can feel the warmth of your skin,
For tonight we shall commit this ghastly sin.
I can't wait to feel the curves of your body,
And yes, hunni, I'm feeling a bit naughty.
Sliding my tounge to your sweet lips,
Touching and feeling your body with my finger tips.
Holding your body, waiting for us to become one,
Any in between breaks? Hell, there shall be none.
You can have all of me tonight,
But first I shall warn you that I bite.
I gaze into your deep eyes,
You push into me and I give those heavy sighs.
Your gentle hands across my soft skin,
Baby, hurry up, I wanna do this thing.
My lips find yours and they leave me without breath,
This is the first time I havent thought about death.
My mind goes elsewhere,
You are now playing with my hair.
I push you off to have a lick,
Oh baby, your making me love sick.
I slowly brush my body back up, reaching your lips once again,
In my life, there shall never be any other men.
My heart beats faster as we become one,
My tounge seems to be having some fun.
I feel you inside me, my body begins to shake.
To you, this seems a peice of cake.
Louder and louder our voices become,
Your making my body feel so numb.
One final breath and you are so deep inside me,
I can't stop it, I'm screaming out the plea.
Letting my body lay back down against yours.
We are behind closed doors.
I press my lips against your own,
I shall never ever feel alone.
On your chest, my head shall rest,
My hair shall be a total mess.
Replaying that blissful moment over in my mind,
No other guy is worth to find.
My blackened heart was always yours, the color of coal,
And now you have my body and my soul,
I have never loved you more than I do at this very moment,
This message, I believe has been sent.

I am completely yours.

*It's bad, yes I know but I dunno, I was sorta inspired...
ღ.Rαynє.ღ

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ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joshy555

    Your a feisty one, aren't you? Ha ha, I liked it. It's really great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Angel

    I absolutely love your poem! its good, hey im not sure if i know you from someone but u sound familiar, i may be wrong tho, uhm... do u know a guy name iman, if you do email me or something, k, im not trying to creep you out or anything, i was jw

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven

    Great poem, really liked it
    -steven

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    It's very good! I enjoyed it a lot. Your details and imagery are fantastic. My only tip is to relax the rhyming a bit. Rhyme is not required, and this poem might be better if it was free verse. Take my advice with a grain of salt, but I liked it a lot! Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by morgan

    I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
    its sensual.
    idk if thats the right word lol
    i think thats it.
    but i loved this!
    its def. perfect.

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