Its sad but tru, i felt like dis before : (

Hey nice poem...its pretty cool and i agree with the last person

Your rhyming is pretty good, Loved this line the best:
Wanted to spread my wings and carry you on them
Amazing! Your a pretty good poet!

Excellent
5/5

Wow, I felt like this when me an my ex split up; I thought he was the one but all the time he was cheating on me (lol) but at least I found out what he was really like and could mend my heart =) so can you; everyone can ... -=) 5/5. Brilliant poem, loved it
Much love, Emma xox

That was deep it was good though sad still good
so nice i love it u got alot o good stuff

Another great one. You are a REALLY good writter. Keep it up man. Maybe publish a few.

What a nice poem....u kno how to write....

Manda

Nice, i really enjoyed this

I love it. Its really sensual. Kewl.

Wow i really like this one ur good.

I like diz poem
itz nice
very sad...but nice

Such a great words..im seriously speechless..!!! wonderful work!