Waiting for u to realize

by james   Aug 13, 2006


You talk of happiness, love and life
but I'm here waiting for u to realize that i love u and always will b here
is that not enough do u want more?
id rip my heart out and give it to u, and carve Uryour name in it
to show my affection
i dunno what id do w/o u...your my everything
my inner soul calls for u but
all i hear are echos
my heart bleeds for u
but all thats there is a puddle of blood
cause u don't come and save it
or save me, from a life time of sadness
a life I'm willing to lead if...and only if it leads to u

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  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    Hey i'm sorry about ur girl- i know how much it hurts to love someone to an extent and them just not give u a chance. i think u can relate to my poem "down on my knees" please read and comment! keep writing- i love ur quotes to! God bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    WOW, that poem is really good but every one says that about every one's not that i don't like hearing that but i don't no how to put the words together to discribe how good your poem was keep em coming
    aunabeth

  • 17 years ago

    by Aline

    Show more affection,
    it's a great poem great meaning, but go one and have stronger and powerful affections
    i liked it:)

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ.Total.Mess.ღ™

    Aww, it's cute (I couldn't think of another word) Its full of emotion and it's deep. I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work!! Anways, I'll shut up now and give you 5/5 =]
    Love,
    Rayne x3

    Peace

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