Hey darl man i l0ve the w0rds used in this p0em. u have such a beautiful talent with w0rds man l0l. i luv reading ur w0rk. keep it. very well written. xx

Awww that was cute and sweet and yeah i loved it..the rhyhm and flow was perfect..ilu 5/5

Aww, very pretty taleee! i like this stylee, its fun.. i like the word you started with, its nice and powerful and makes a good start to a great poem! i loved the words you chose and the way they carried the lines.. very nice hunny! 5/5

Beautiful. I never thought to try anything like that before. Inspirational on a number of levels. 5/5

Fun style, I might try it^-^. Great job

Awh. It's better then mine. And I agree Hun. They are really hard to write. Mine took me nearly one hour to get it perfect. Great job, I loved it. :]]]]]]]]]

Good job again! It's hard to have every line starting with the same letter but you did it great and even had it flowing nicely.

Hey natalie, wonderful poem!, you have done a really great job on this one. it really makes me think of love and how strong it is!
wonderful poem!
love mel

I lik this one it makes me really happy...a 5/5 for me..

Hmmm.
not quite as goodim sorry to say.
4/5
it didnt impress me as much.
The meaning was missing
and your descriptiveness had disappeared.

It was still good but not 5/5 good