Comments : Solitaire (Lai)

  • 15 years ago

    by Natalie

    Kaylee--- Like I said on the other site. I loved this. I've never heard of this style either, but it looks really hard, I don't think I'd even be able to do it. You pulled it off really well. Chose great wording for it! An excellent job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great Lia this poem hits its mark

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow hun, that was amazing.. It was beautiful in a very sad kind of way.. Your descriptions were so detailed and the imagery they produced really made me feel like I was there.. Your words were perfectly chosen and fit the poem really well.. Wonderful work, I loved it! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. I like this one. It has loads of emotion in it. I love emotion lol. The flow was good, words chosen out excellently, and the rhymes were well done. The topic was amazing how you expressed yourself in it, and the vocab makes all the difference in how you really feel about it. Great job! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 15 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Amazing job... I Love how you can switch styles and still do wonderfully. I may try one of these myself (though probably fail). Great job... I loved how the five syllable lines seemed to read fast... and then it slowed down at the two syllable...and then pick up again on and off.. Great.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 15 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I liked this form! You used it well too. I had to read it a few times only to get the full meaning because I feel it was written so complex. I really can't find a thing wrong with this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Darien

    I'm not too familiar with this format, but it was a joy to read. I know I read a lot of different style poems, but I have yet to try any of them. I guess I'm scared because it limits what I can write, but it takes someone with a lot of talent to write something like this. Well done Kaylee, this was a very sad poem. You used the right words to describe things.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I've never heard of the style but it is really capturing.
    This poem had all the beauties of a true poetic write.
    I loved it, you did a good job here
    xxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by Sondos

    Like the rest have said, this is the first time i have heard of this form but it was beautifully formed.

    Gorgeous way of stringin the words togethor to create the eerie atmosphere and point across.

    Well Done

    Sondos