Rememberance of my death

by VYXSIN   Aug 14, 2006


Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my naked soul.
It slays me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In pain I cry out, Why?!
while death surrounds me.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon blind eyes.

This is because of you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, well written, but the structure was not that good, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Also it was very short, I'd like to see it a bit longer.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! Very dark poem indeed. But still its written really well. Good flow. I really liked it. Keep them up! xx