I like it alot.. the poem to me its inspiring in a way that.. she never really gave up and that her spirit never dies.. :)

Very great work.Great flow. Keep up the good work! ~Megan~
P.S- thanks for the comment...its very much appricated! :D

I loved your poem it reminds me of the guy I like he's leaving for the navy and thanks for your comment o save me

Thanx for ur comment lol and that poem is soo sweet my sisters bf's gone off to the navy so i kinda unstand like she must be feeling now really and its just such a gd peom i love it its gr8 luv ells XxX

Wow..
You're good. It's a really great poem. A different twist on love, and showing what the real world is like. Keep on writing Hun. You've got talent!

Damn..this is a good poem..i love it..well written and good story line 5/5

Thanks 4 my comment..and i like ya poem!! It tells a story aswell as havin a gd rhythm 2 it!! Luvya..x.x.x.x

It was a very sweet poem. thanks for the comment. i like the poetic stories.

Dang!!! Girls, excellent work on this
one. God bless are troops and their
families in these very trying times,
and God bless you two for sharing,
Bogie