Hearts

by ali   Aug 15, 2006


(rewrote and made longer. hope you like)

Hearts get broke
Then they mend,
But can they really,
Ever love again??
Problems will come
And they will go
But the deep pain
Will always show
She was just being a girl
Living in this heartless world
And little did she know
That he would just go
She was left alone
Feeling all sorts of blue
And when he came back
She just knew
She knew he wasn’t worth it
She knew he wasn’t for her
She new he was scum
But she never thought
He heart would never mend.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sickoflies

    Ali u rock. keep up the poetry this one was awsome 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Ali,
    I feel so honored that you would take my advise. I do have to say it did make such a differsence, It is truly beautiful now I wish I could rate it again ,it would definately be a 5 I want to read your others, I hope you`ll read mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    This was a great stanza, I would love to see you add to it. The wording was beautiful it just ended to soon.