Aww. It's so sad. I can totally relate, VERY well lol. Flow was good, but a bit rocky in some parts, and rhymes were well done. Excellent write! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Veyr nice love poem. Very cute, very sweet, but also very cliche.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Thanks for reading my poem, i liked this alot, I personally found a couple of lines needed re-reading for phrasing but i think thats me not used to poetry form.
Keep it up
Pete

All the comments about your poem are all said
so all i canm say is this is a great job for me and this one rhyme even a little nice job

Geneross

Awh, that was great hunny! It was simple yet explained all the emotions that you felt.. I can so relate.. It flowed well, the emotions were clear, and your descriptions were good! Nice job! 5/5

Aww, hang in there, honey, it gets better, honest! The poem was good, there was one flaw I saw, but nothing worth mentioning, really, 4/5

A sad poem. Quite ordinary in the sense nine out of ten love poems are more or less the same as this.
I felt especially in the beginning of the poem you were repeating yourself. For instance all the first stanza really says is "I remember that terrible day when you (and your love) left." That could be said in one, maybe two lines, not four. The same with stanza two, that just says "before you went you said we needed to talk," again it doesn't take four lines to say that. I suggest in future writes you make sure you say things only once (unless repetition is intended) other wise it can get tedious for the reader. I hope my suggestions have been helpful. Thanks for sharing, keep writing.

Wow. This was so sad. Nicely done I thought though. I didn't think the rhyming was forced, and I liked the flow aswel. I could relate in somewhat way aswel, so that's cool.

A pretty good poem in my opinion. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I thought it was all a lie
I kept telling myself you were joking
That's when I began to cry
That was a very well written love poem. I can relate to this very well and I really enjoyed reading it. It really captured me from the first line, for I have felt the pain when someones gone away. I loved it, and I loved your emotion!

That was beautiful..it reminds me of the way i felt or sometimes feel...great job loved it

Aw i felt like that before its ok hope you find someone new ................ good job 5/5

I m actually known with hard voting, like i only put 5/5 when it is REALLY worth 5/5 so i had to out 4/5 bcz ur poem is great, great msg, but still u have to use more powerful and strong hard words.

You are so so so great u did it!

Great Poem KEEP WRITING!! that was great and i can relate

Wow thats alsome!!! i loved the poem im adding you to my favorites!! =)

OMG this is like amazing. Your an awesome writer... eye love it.

That was well written

Hey that poem was great like said already i can relate very well...loved it .

Loved it, great job. I can relate to this poem, 5/5

I love it!!