I think its funny when people yell at me over emial- it proves they are too scared to say it to my face. But anyway, good poem, hope to read more.

'You tell me though email'

I think you mean through.

'and you look...through me like I am not there'

The ...'s are distracting. They're misplaced. But I enjoyed your poem. It's really sad and heartfelt. 5/5

You attacked your audience directly which was very bold of you lol, i think it worked well anyways as it points your point across

xxx alex xxx