This an excellent poem Im sorry about your brother as well, thats very sad to hear
I have also had loved ones taken away so i know how it feels. If you need to talk PM me. 5 for you!

Wow hunny, that was amazing.. The flow was effortless and the rhymes perfect.. The descriptions you used were great and the words contained so much power and emotion.. Wonderful work, Ily. 5/5

I can feel the pulse in your script. Good one again. I think i love your style of writing. keep it up Hon.

This is an intensly moving poem well written

Hmm another great poet....so i give 5/5 keep up the good work!

god bless