It's not bad at all. it's really cool. i like it.

Hey this is really good its very.. heartfelt?
thanks for commenting on my poem. im glad you like it :)
keep up the good work 5/5

Hey this is really good its very.. heartfelt?
thanks for commenting on my poem. im glad you like it :)
keep up the good work 5/5

You've got such talent, I truly understood the meaning... *hugs* ^_^

Wow.. I really like it.. your peoms are deep.. it kinda reminds me of my poems *magnolia tree* part 1-3..

Lovez always,
Brandy

Hi tony, we probably don't have much in common other than the massive pain we endure. i have read some of your poems, and really think you have some talent. stay strong, even if it seems like no one is "in your corner" right now.

It was well written, but I just don't like reading poems about people hurting themselves on purpose. I have one called Cutting Your Life. You might like it...Jpoet*

Yo Tony....poem its not bad at all..i know how id feels just hang on there....time will come.....rachy

I don't think it was bad at all. i really liked it. all of your poems are really good..you have a gift...if you never were to write again i'd truly miss it. 5/5

Well written. really well written.
"dreaming of a place where i truly belong..."
isn't that what we all want. you just put it into words.
tannis

Awesome poem.. sounds alot like me
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Im so in love with your poetry your pain...i can see it from my point of view its like theres nothing left for us and our only friend is a blade ''we mend our wounds with blades'' love it 5/5