*hugs* so sad, good form of writing its something new and unusual "Fantastic!!!"

Hmm, that was a sad poem. More sad than dark I would think. Not enough imagery for a dark poem, and not really haunting in any sort of way. Oh well, great write.

I agree with what Darien said. There wasn't very much imagery, especially for a dark poem. But it seemed more sad and depressing than dark? Oh well. Great write though

Oh, wow Jessy. Very nicely done. So sad though. Your choice of wording in this piece was GREAT! Annnd, I really really really liked the title. Great job hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I like :)

I am speechles..gosh i love your technique of writing. you really know how to express your self powerfully and amazingly. you are a great writer. and very talented. keep up the good work 5/5

Pretty good, though not as good as your other ones.

Wow kewl......i dont really know anything bout forms of poetry i just write what i feel...mostly...but you put this beautifuly.....im going to put you onb my favs!! i lik ur poetry alot..

U seem really shadowy in ur poems

Awwwhh so sad. so beautiful and so amazingly good.
YOUR A FANTASTIC WRITER!!

much lovees.

amberina**

Great poem, keep up the good work

I like it alot very true to home

Its all good but it makes a little sense. i like it otherwise, keep up the good work.