Nicely done.

I lvoed it the erses were long..which makes the rarity of them beign good rare..I LOVE IT..amamzing...i wish u 2 the best of luck! lylab! Miss talking to you.

Lissa

Wow! that was awesome. (i am snappingmy fingers on this end of the screen). i hope you never have to kill yourself over a girl. we don't like to hurt you guys, we just don't want to seem... how should i put this... desprateor clingy. best of luck to you and your girly. buh-bye!... oh, and i added two more songs onto my list for my band. check 'em out!

I've read alot of your later poems and i like them. mainly because they sparked feeling i cant forget. all the pai and anger that made me feel as if i was going insane. this poem also sparked too many bad memories. i almost feel as if it could be about me. but hey , i guess it helps to know were no alone.
Rocky
Love is the law, love under will