Sad...Great imagery and descriptive words. Keep writing. I love you.

It's very good. Kinda sounds like a song.

Wow very good and emotional poem! loved it sorry i havent commented your work for ages! but as always i loved this! The flow was very very good!
Your work keeps on getting better and better! 5/5
Take Care
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*- Tormented

I love the poem, it is relly good, would you do me a favor and plz read my two new poems, Darling Death and Beauiful Now. thanx shanik

Wow i remember when i use to be able to do all of that.. I cant lay with any one in the bed with out crying to hard. so ya.
ttyl
zach