I loved this poem i think its was well written ^^ 5/5! --comment on mine sometime--MEG

Ahhh its really good. im here for u whenever u need me. i love u and miss u more than u know.

Well..this poem was really amazing, i think u really written so very lovely steph..just keep the good JOB up....5/5...

Jammal

Nice rhymthem.. hey if you ever wanna chat, msn = moka989@hotmail.com

Ian

Hey sweety,

Guess who's back? I'm afraid it is no surprise to you, since you already had noticed my return. Thanks hun =)

As you know I love your work. This is fantastic. I wish such great poetry would "just pop into my head" haha.

I love how you start the first lines, it gives the poem a great flow.

While reading I could not see where you were going until I read the last part of the poem;

You Came, You Tried To Clear The Storm
But I'm Still Left Here, Torn.

It really hits in like a bomb. Such a sad ending.

I love how you end this poem with "torn", the same as the title.

I loved your poem hun. Very well done once again. Keep writing!

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wow, i love your choice of words they flowed so well. great write, thanks for sharing :)